This morning I saw sexy
eyes from sleep
They are originally
big and round like marbles
As she yawns with her mouth
opening wide
like she’s about to swallow
everyone in the world
She splashes her face with water.
She’s then awake ...
-Asanda Mini
Asanda this is very insightful. Keep writing girl! Make sure you are keeping a book of these!
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This is wonderful, Asanda! Here, you take such a simple morning ritual, and transform it into captivating poetry. Imagine if you were writing down every experience you had throughout the day! You'd never get any actual living done, but wow - those poems would pop.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your beautiful contributions to our little blog world, Asanda.
I loved this poem, Asanda. I particularly like the image of your yawn about to swallow everyone in the whole world. Effective. Thanks for the creative ideas.
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